Friday, December 11, 2009

On Stage

My pen presses page-
my voice blesses stage-
the noise reaches ears-
and morphs with your cheers-
the formation makes-
the foundation shake-
And all of the while-
I can't help but smile.....


2 comments:

  1. Awesome poem (lyrics?)! I like it a lot. However, I think the word "morph" doesn't seem to flow into it. Can't think of another word myself, but overall = :)

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  2. You make a very good point. Thanks for the feedback!

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